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Sep. 18th, 2007

 
It's raining. I don't bear the roar of rain beating the window panes. Someone is knocking at the door. I can hear his screams of anguish.
-HEEEYYY!!!...VIGGOOOO!!...open the door....You, bastard...I know you're in there....!!!...Open up...!!-
You're soaking wet. You're shaking like a leaf. I can  touch your fear, I can feel the bitter taste of your anguish on my tongue.
You're taking a long draught of whisky.
I fix my eyes on you : painful flashings give out from your eyes and they pierce me through.
-WHYYY?!?!...-you're screaming- Why!?!...How can ...you love me?!?...I don't want you to love me....STOP IT!!!...You've to stop loving me...-
You're slowly gliding and curling up on the floor.
You're crying and I'm crying with you. No tears. No moaning. We don't have tears anymore.
-I want  back my life...let me go...get out of my heart........ get out of inside me!!!......please...Vig...-
I kneel beside you and embrace you fondly. No words.
-I hate you....I hate you,Vig...- you're clinging to me  so desperately.
I'm beginning to cradle you. -Hush...my love....shhhh...easy...- I say.
I can't . I can't tell you. I can't tell you that I got lost in your soul, in your love. I could never find the way to get out of you.
It's raining.
  

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anthos65
Sep. 19th, 2007 04:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you my dear!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
You're very kind and I'm flattered!!!
mooms
Sep. 19th, 2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
Again, so much in so few words. Very powerful and moving.
anthos65
Sep. 19th, 2007 05:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Your words are very precious to me!
shegollum
Sep. 30th, 2007 04:21 am (UTC)
Damn, girl. Took me a few tries to get the rhythm of this and then - POW! - it hit hard. Paired with its successor, it is very powerful in its imagery and words. I can understand that desperation, although in a somewhat changed context. Beautifully done, especially with the two halves as a whole.
anthos65
Sep. 30th, 2007 02:36 pm (UTC)
I feel honoured!! Thank you very much for your flattering words!

Hugs, Anto.
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